Randall: The love between Jacob and Darlene - more back story; and the ground up cherry pits.
Parul: I like the scene where we see Ruth Langamore grow - she’s so tough but she cares so much about Wyatt, and argues with him to attend college.
This week, the Story Grid Showrunners watch the second season of the Netflix TV Series OZARK - a thrilling story about an unassuming finance man who is forced to run to the Ozarks to launder money to save his and his family's life. He faces extra pressure from the FBI, the local drug family and his family is falling apart. It's a brilliant combination of a thriller with an underlying story of morality and a portrayal of a marriage under extreme pressure.
Randall: Great 2nd season, they kept the surprises and tension going
Parul: This show is on fire!
It’s a great way to analyze any story and figure out if it works. Here are the questions. We’ll touch on them in this podcast, but the full notes can be downloaded afterward.
BEGINNING HOOK
Inciting Incident: Del is killed/ They must get rid of Del before the Cartel finds out
Turning Point Progressive Complication: Helen tasks Marty (on behalf of the Cartel) with securing reparations for Del’s death, as he was the lieutenant.
Crisis: Does Marty back down from his request for reparations from the Snells or continue to push the Snells (both actions are dangerous)
Climax: Marty doesn’t back down but keeps his emotions in check, and talks about making financial reparations
Resolution: Darlene is adamant that they won’t pay. Jacob kills Ash as reparations
MIDDLE BUILD
Inciting Incident: Rachel starts working with the FBI (endangering the whole family operation)
Turning Point Progressive Complication: Rachel tells Marty she is bugged
Crisis: Should Marty cut ties with Rachel or use her to provide false info to the FBI
Climax: Marty wants to use Rachel to feed FBI false info
Resolution: Rachel ODs on bad heroin and Marty sets the FBI up and gets Rachel to treatment in Miami
END PAYOFF
Inciting Incident: Jacob is killed by Darlene who antagonises the Byrds by demanding Zeke in return for the casino land
Turning Point Progressive Complication: The Bryd family are falling apart (Wendy is getting reckless, Charlotte asks to emancipate, Jonah is embracing the criminal lifestyle, Marty is feeling remorse (Morality) at Mason’s death
Crisis: Does Marty continue to work with the Cartel or choose to walk away?
Climax: Marty decides to plan his family’s escape
Resolution: Wendy doesn’t want to leave, so they stay and open the casino. Cade is killed (possibly as a warning to Marty?)
Randall: Thriller again? Life and death are the stakes in this story. So much life and death.
Parul: It’s a thriller with a heavy dose of Morality and Worldview.
Thriller (Global)
Morality (Internal Genre)
Each has an episode which is totally dedicated to the protagonists’ back story and told as a flashback, the whole episode is in the past. Why does one work and the other doesn’t?
Killing Eve - there was no lead up to it, and there was nothing compelling or surprising.
Ozark - The writers hinted and led the viewers to the flashback, suggesting some tragedy had happened that made them drift apart, made Wendy have an affair, that made them the family we find at the beginning of the series. It filled a hole, answered questions we had, and drove the story forward.
We also have the flashback in this episode of Jacob and Darlene, perfectly positioned when we see they are not of the same mind and we see how they met and how Darlene has always been headstrong, which is why Jacob loves her, which is why he loves her even when she poison’s Jacob.
What’s the next Series for the podcast?
Ozark 3
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Randall: The love between Jacob and Darlene - more back story; and the ground up cherry pits.
Parul: I like the scene where we see Ruth Langamore grow - she’s so tough but she cares so much about Wyatt, and argues with him to attend college.